16.A survey by the Perception Institute asked black and white women to score their attitudes towards different hair types out of 5—with 5 being the most positive.
Perception Institute 的一项调查要求黑人和白人女性对她对不同型的态度打分,满分 5 分——5 分表示最积极。机翻
17.Arsenal, sitting at the top of the Premier League when this research paper was published, have scored 13 goals from corners out of a season total of 70.
19.And the app informs me that on the real test, 16 out of 22 would score somewhat between 24 and 30 — right? — when it's converted to a score out of 30.
20.So overall the essay is well-organized and make solid points but given the word choice and unclear connections of ideas, especially in the fourth paragraph, this essay would receive a score of four out of five.